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Jeffery Santiago

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Join date : 2011-02-21
Age : 24

PostSubject: Jeffery Santiago   Mon Feb 21, 2011 7:35 pm

Vital Statistics:

Name: Jeffery Santiago
Age/Grade: Age:17 Grade:12th
Gender: Male
Height: 5ft 9in
Weight: 160 pounds.
Appearance: Jeffery has black hair. When he is out of school for a long time, he paints his hair yellow. He never changes his clothes. (Eww)

Relations: None Yet.



Sexuality: Straight
Preferences: Big Breasts
Likes: Soccer and Video Games.
Dislikes: Nerds and Football.


Back story: Jeffery had good parents that looked up to him, so he is highly motivated.
History: (What is your character's life story up to this moment?):When Jeffery was six, his sister was diagnosed with Diabetes. Jeffery's family was poor, so Jeffery had to find a job to get money for his sister's insulin. He was always a hardworking student. He had to waste all his summer vacation to work for his sister. Finally, his sister turned 14 and learned how to earn money all by herself. The problem was that his mom was sick now, she was diagnosed with cancer. Jeffery's mom sent him to this school to forget all his problems he had in his childhood. Jeffery is now a senior and is very popular in his school.


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PostSubject: Re: Jeffery Santiago   Tue Feb 22, 2011 12:21 am

Can you please fix the spelling/Grammar issues in your history please?
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PostSubject: Re: Jeffery Santiago   Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:41 am

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PostSubject: Re: Jeffery Santiago   Tue Feb 22, 2011 10:36 am

There was one small thing. You used the wrong waste (you had waist) but, I fixed it for you.

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