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Louise Hoobs

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PostSubject: Louiseeee   Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:52 am

lol


Last edited by Louise Hoobs on Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:43 pm; edited 4 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Sat Dec 12, 2009 6:48 am

Just so you now, with a height and weight like that your char is severly underweight. You might want to find a bmi chart or something, but she shoul weigh about 8 stone to be healthy at that height. Just thought I'd offer some advice.
Other than that, nice character.
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Louise Hoobs

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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Sat Dec 12, 2009 7:10 am

Salix wrote:
Just so you now, with a height and weight like that your char is severly underweight. You might want to find a bmi chart or something, but she shoul weigh about 8 stone to be healthy at that height. Just thought I'd offer some advice.
Other than that, nice character.

Ha ha yeah about that... that is my actual weight and height...but I DO eat, not annorexic or anything. Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:28 pm

Everything looks good, but your appearance description just mentions your face and skin. Please add more information about the rest of your body; maybe add the part about your weight.

And your history sounds good, but it’s also a little choppy. Please add some more details to your history and maybe some about you living with your family.
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:13 am

Edited but I thought I didn't need to put anything about height or weight seeing as it's in the Vital Statistics Section already.
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:49 am

*blinks* ...cake?
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:43 am

Salix wrote:
*blinks* ...cake?

*blinks back* Depends...does the cake contain geletin? Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:57 pm

No, 'schocolate. With icing. And layers. No geletin.
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Mon Dec 14, 2009 12:01 pm

Only if you share it with me?
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:45 pm

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Louiseeee   Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:28 am

Deal.
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