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Louise Hoobs
Posts : 25
Join date : 2009-12-12
Age : 29
 |  Subject: Louiseeee  Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:52 am | |
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Salix
Posts : 91
Join date : 2009-08-28
Location : England
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Sat Dec 12, 2009 6:48 am | |
| Just so you now, with a height and weight like that your char is severly underweight. You might want to find a bmi chart or something, but she shoul weigh about 8 stone to be healthy at that height. Just thought I'd offer some advice.
Other than that, nice character. | |
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Louise Hoobs
Posts : 25
Join date : 2009-12-12
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Sat Dec 12, 2009 7:10 am | |
| - Salix wrote:
- Just so you now, with a height and weight like that your char is severly underweight. You might want to find a bmi chart or something, but she shoul weigh about 8 stone to be healthy at that height. Just thought I'd offer some advice.
Other than that, nice character. Ha ha yeah about that... that is my actual weight and height...but I DO eat, not annorexic or anything.  | |
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Kenneth
Posts : 238
Join date : 2009-08-31
Age : 32
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:28 pm | |
| Everything looks good, but your appearance description just mentions your face and skin. Please add more information about the rest of your body; maybe add the part about your weight.
And your history sounds good, but it’s also a little choppy. Please add some more details to your history and maybe some about you living with your family. | |
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Louise Hoobs
Posts : 25
Join date : 2009-12-12
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:13 am | |
| Edited but I thought I didn't need to put anything about height or weight seeing as it's in the Vital Statistics Section already. | |
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Salix
Posts : 91
Join date : 2009-08-28
Location : England
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:49 am | |
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Louise Hoobs
Posts : 25
Join date : 2009-12-12
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:43 am | |
| - Salix wrote:
- *blinks* ...cake?
*blinks back* Depends...does the cake contain geletin?  | |
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Salix
Posts : 91
Join date : 2009-08-28
Location : England
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:57 pm | |
| No, 'schocolate. With icing. And layers. No geletin. | |
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Louise Hoobs
Posts : 25
Join date : 2009-12-12
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Mon Dec 14, 2009 12:01 pm | |
| Only if you share it with me? | |
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Kenneth
Posts : 238
Join date : 2009-08-31
Age : 32
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:45 pm | |
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Salix
Posts : 91
Join date : 2009-08-28
Location : England
| | Subject: Re: Louiseeee Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:28 am | |
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