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 Max Ba-Alawi. ( Student )

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PostSubject: Max Ba-Alawi. ( Student )   Sun May 09, 2010 8:57 am

Name: Max Ba-Alawi
Age/Grade: 19-senior
Gender: Male.
Height: 1,34 Meters.
Weight: 63 Kilos.
Appearance: He is a brown-haired guy with smiple clothes, lean, tall with brown eyes, and white skin. And carry a laptop must of the time.

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Sexuality: Straight, not very open with strangers.
Preferences: Has a fetish for girls with glasses, but trys to hide it.
Likes: Cats, music, games and his Laptop.
Dislikes: Work, selfishness and mostly cheaters.


Back story:
History: Max was bad at everything, a bad son, he caused problems for his father because of fighting. And a bad brother, he always beated his brother for any small mistake and never helped him with his problems. And bad student. with bad marks and fights, he even bested up his female teacher.
Bad things started happening to him, his mother, who was the only one thinks that he's good, has passed away.
So he wanted to change, and after he failed at his last year of high school, he came to Whisper Hallow Academy for a new page.


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PostSubject: Re: Max Ba-Alawi. ( Student )   Sun May 09, 2010 10:02 am

Um.. May you please be more descriptive? For instance, describe more than just his hair and clothes in his appearance. Like, what are his eyes like, is he skinny and lean or more on the muscular side, and so on.

For his History, try to be more descriptive. How was he so 'bad' at everything? Did anything else happen in his life?

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PostSubject: Re: Max Ba-Alawi. ( Student )   Sun May 09, 2010 10:03 am

Ok, I'll try.
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PostSubject: Re: Max Ba-Alawi. ( Student )   Sun May 09, 2010 10:32 am

Alright, approved ^^
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