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 Zane Eozen-Student

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PostSubject: Zane Eozen-Student   Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:22 am

Vital Statistics:

Name: Last name, First Name Eozen, Zane
Age/Grade: 14 Grade 9th
Gender: Male
Height: 5'6
Weight: 50kg
Appearance: Zane hates wearing school uniform but has to since the school won't allow him to wear "free clothes". His normal dress i blue denim jeans with a black or orange+black T-shirt on summers. In winters he likes to wear black Timberland Hoodies. Long hair, a bit skinny body, more then average size of feet. blue eyes, black hair, no muscles.


Sexuality: Straight, shy around most girls
Preferences: Blondes, Girls who are kind and dont talk to much
Likes: Reading books, manga. Playing games on the computer. Playing tennis, table tennis and playing piano alone. Zane loves to eat food like Ramen and dessert like Brownies, cookies. He also likes playing Chess and Checkers games which require calmness.
Dislikes: Most boys and girls, idiots, smokers, seniors, football, teachers, and sour food.

Back story:

Born Saga
When Zane was born he was definitely different from other new born. His first word, when he was 5 months old was Zane though he wanted to say Train. After a year he started walking his first steps. When he was 3 he fell from the cupboard and hit the back of his head. He was trying to see an electric socket. His mother and father took him outside because he couldn't breath and his body tarted to twist. When he went out his body returned back to normal. At that moment his whole personality changed somehow. He became a really clever child.

The Adventure Starts
At age 6 they sent him to school Kindergarten. He refused to do his work there because he said "This school is really dumb and boring, Isn't there anything fun to do?". Everyone thought he is a weird child and his parents took him away from that school humiliated. His father bought him his first video game that year and he became a pro at the start of it. His first game was Sonic: The Hedgehog from Sega. He was really good at it and aced it. His parents finally started to understand that Zane was a different, well "special child". But he still had to pass Kindergarten. Zane was still angry that he had to do Kindergarten but he did and passed with flying colours. When Zane was 10 he went to 4th Grade. Thats when he started to make enemies, well he didn't want to but he made them automatically due to his mind and looks. A few older kids about 13-12 in 4th Grade used to bully him and that send Zane a negative thought. A few days later Zane taught those kids a lesson by kicking their ass, in boxing. He beat everyone really easily. The trick was that those Neanderthals kept trying to punch Zane and got tired eventually.
Despair Saga
Next year he left that school and joined a school for Talented minds. He made a friend called Daichi Kunchi. He liked Zane alot because of his attitude and calmness. They were friends for 3 years until finally when Zane turned age 13, Daichi was killed by a mysterious student afterschool. It was Christmas and everyone had left. Zane was waiting for Daichi to go down stairs. Daichi told him that he would be down in a few minutes. 10 minutes later Zane ran upstairs, in an angry mood thinking why hes making him wait so long. He opened the door, it wouldn't budge. He pushed it with such force that it finally opened and Zane saw Daichi's head on the floor he looked to the walls and saw wiring with the door. It was a trap! Zane fell to his knees and thought who did this cunning plot? He ran downstairs and informed the guards who were outside buying cigars. 15 minutes later they all went up and their was nothing on the ground, no head, no blood. It was all clean. Zane cried that he sworn that his best friends head was on the floor and the guards didnt belive him. 2 months later the news was "Boy missing, Lost from School, Best friend says his head was cut off". Zane was depressed that his best friend was gone. His parents told him that he's going to a new school that just opened. Its called Whisper Hallow school. Zane agreed at once. He didnt want to walk the hall way where his best friends head was lying. Zane arrived their 1 year later at the age of 14. His quest is to find out what happened to his friend.

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PostSubject: Re: Zane Eozen-Student   Fri Nov 19, 2010 4:13 pm

Please be more informative on the appearance part. It's not supposed to describe your clothes, but your physical appearance. You can change clothes whenever you want, it's not as easy with physical traits.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Eozen-Student   Sat Nov 20, 2010 5:46 am

I changed the appearance part
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Eozen-Student   Sat Nov 20, 2010 7:36 am

Wow, extremely descriptive. I'm impressed. Your character truly does have an interesting story, I like how just.. imperfect you made him (even if his past really does seem like a manga, what's wrong with that? XD)

Your appearance section seems fine now, Approved!
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Eozen-Student   Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:25 am

Actually this is what really happend to me lol and thanks
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