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 Jacks Mad Skills!!

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Dachou



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PostSubject: Jacks Mad Skills!!   Sat Nov 27, 2010 3:41 pm

Name: Smartness

Ability: This doesn't really affect Jacks reputation as a joker or class clown at all. He also has a very wide thought range and photographic memory, making studying and doing homework a breeze

History: (Jack has practiced for ears. His father had pushed him to do very good in school.

Name: BallSports

Ability: Jack is really good at all kinds of Ballsports. He is a natural at them.

History: Jack has practiced after being on almost all the sports teams in his past schools.


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Cyra Redfield

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PostSubject: Re: Jacks Mad Skills!!   Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:57 pm

All sports? Really? Isn't that a little Mary Sue?

I'm going to have to see the input of other mods here about that. Sports is such a huge area, I don't think anyone even could be good at all of them, not even decent at all in fact.

All(though I'd prefer most) ballsports would be more approvable.
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PostSubject: Re: Jacks Mad Skills!!   Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:03 pm

Edited. Ya i just kinda figured it would be implied. Sorry im not a genius here >.<
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PostSubject: Re: Jacks Mad Skills!!   Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:06 pm

No problem, Mary Sues are way too easy to create, and way too hard to detect yourself :3

Just edit the "Jack is really good at all kinds of sports" to "Jack is really good at all kinds of ballsports" to avoid confusion.


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